Alhena Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 206 Location : Glasgow Date d'inscription : 14/04/2008
| Sujet: Fragment #83 - Breath in, breath out Mar Nov 25, 2008 6:20 pm | |
| Tuesday, November 25th 2008 Unknown I'm sitting on a chair, my hands on my knees. My eyes are set on a imaginary spot, right in front of me, on the wall. Nothing on my wrists or on my ankles. I'm somehow free, free to walk around. I did that. I hid in the corner, too. But just now, I'm sitting on a chair. I'm focusing on my breathing. In. Out. In. Out. But the round of questions fills my head. In. Out. Why me? In. Out. What does he want? In. Out. How come I didn't see it coming? In. Out. Does anybody know? In. Out. Has Jake been back to the office? In. Out. How's Steve? In. Out. What is he going to do? In. Out. But why? Why me? In. Out. In. Out. Calm down, Charlie. In. Out. You are still alive. In. Out. That's a good sign. In. Out. But what day is it? In. Out. Are we still monday? In. Out. Is it tuesday already? In. Out. I didn't sleep since I've been here, that I know. In. Out. I walked, to get in that room. In. Out. But what about in the car? In. Out. I remember the gun. In. Out. In. Out. And then, the pill I had to take. In. Out. Yes, I must have slept. In. Out. But how long? In. Out. If only I knew, I could guess where I am. In. Out.
I look around slowly, for the tenth time at least. I force myself to describe the cell I am in to keep an analytic mind. It's a cube. No window. It must be about five square meters. A bed, fixed to the wall. A toilet seat, with some toilet paper next to it. A glass and a bottle of water next to the bed. The chair I am sitting on. And the door.
In. Out. In. Out. In. Out.
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Sargas Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 29 Age : 41 Location : Lille Date d'inscription : 01/10/2008
| Sujet: Re: Fragment #83 - Breath in, breath out Mar Nov 25, 2008 6:54 pm | |
| Hey, great job !!! I love it !! | |
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Mesarthim Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 302 Date d'inscription : 09/04/2008
| Sujet: Re: Fragment #83 - Breath in, breath out Mar Nov 25, 2008 9:00 pm | |
| I LOVE the way you wrote that fragment. Well done, really. Poor Charlie... | |
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Benetnash Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 15 Date d'inscription : 13/11/2008
| Sujet: Re: Fragment #83 - Breath in, breath out Mer Nov 26, 2008 10:06 am | |
| And then, someone knocks at the door. "Sarah Connor?" I liked it | |
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