Polaris Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 67 Age : 40 Location : Second star to the right. Either there or Glasgow Date d'inscription : 15/04/2008
| Sujet: Fragment #21 - Shower Mar Sep 02, 2008 12:38 pm | |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 In Glasgow I'm standing in the shower under the stream of water looking down at the seven little birthmarks on my chest, I was playing join the dots again last night with a Biro so I'm covered in lines. I hear the phone starting to ring. I ignore it for a few minutes but for some reason the person on the other end is not giving in. So I grab a towel and hastily wrap it round my waist and run through to the phone. “Hello?” I say in the most harassed tone I can manage. Imagine you are having a dinner party. The guest list contains; the Queen, your Mum, your Granny, the Pope, the Prime Minister, the President of the United States and your boss. You want this night to go perfectly so the heat is on. Now imagine that dirty old man from the pub who wears that long coat with suspect stains who insists on you calling him Uncle Monty staggering into the room blind drunk only wearing a pair of soiled yellowish green Y-fronts. He clambers up on to the table, squats down knocking over the candle sticks and does a huge steaming brown turd in the middle of the table. He then flops down off the table and passes out in the doorway with his underpants still round his ankles spewing out acrid smelling rainbow coloured vomit from his half closed mouth and nostrils. Imagine how that would make you feel. This is something like how I feel when I hear my father on the other end. | |
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Mesarthim Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 302 Date d'inscription : 09/04/2008
| Sujet: Re: Fragment #21 - Shower Ven Sep 05, 2008 11:18 pm | |
| I think no character ever literally speaking joined the dots... Very nice, original and funny way to refer to the constellation. I really liked it.
I also found this frag very funny and weird in general, very Ed like. Liked the dinner party guess list! | |
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Altaïr Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 160 Age : 36 Location : Paris Date d'inscription : 09/04/2008
| Sujet: Re: Fragment #21 - Shower Sam Sep 06, 2008 12:09 am | |
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Mesarthim Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 302 Date d'inscription : 09/04/2008
| Sujet: Re: Fragment #21 - Shower Sam Sep 06, 2008 11:11 am | |
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Altaïr Ink Star
Nombre de messages : 160 Age : 36 Location : Paris Date d'inscription : 09/04/2008
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